Wednesday, July 19, 2017

Elm Tree Poetry 2017: Week 2 — Day 3


Dear Elm Tree fams, 
Today was the half-way point of the program, which is a trip for Romy and Rod—it feels like just yesterday that we were lounging on our couches, perfecting our lessons plans and passionately scouring books for the poems that we hoped would speak to your children. And now here we are!

 


We started our day by heading over to Brooklyn Museum, where we had a little surprise in store for the kiddos. Before going into the museum for a day of radical learning, we had the kids drop their bags and run headfirst into the museum lawn sprinklers. Romy and Rod have passed by many times and dreamt of running through themselves, so today they lived vicariously before joining the kids themselves.


 


 
 

As other camps began arriving to the museum in perfect lines and crisp, dry clothing, our kids were drenched, muddy and dripping, the sounds of their screams echoing through the museum's glass windows. Annabel took note of the surrounding groups of camps, and noted said: "I feel like there are uncivilized camps and civilized camps, and we're an uncivilized camp." The irony of a bunch of poets looking grimier than some of the rugged, outdoor summer camps was not lost on us. 

 



It took about five minutes of time in the sun during snack time for the kids to dry off, and once they did, we were on to the museum. We entered the Elizabeth A. Sackler Center for Feminist Art. Before walking through the doors, we had the kids gather around and discuss what they believed a "feminist" was. The start the conversation, we asked the museum employee by the entrance to give us her take on the word. Haley broke down her interpretation of the word for the kids: “a feminist is someone who believes in equal rights for everybody.” When we asked the kids if they would consider themselves feminists, they all nodded intently. We asked them, “Can boys be feminists?” The kids, again, said yes emphatically. Before walking through the doors, we asked them to raise their hands if their fathers were feminists. We were happy to see all ten hands raised sky high.


 



The kids prompted our first stop once inside: Judy Chicago's "The Dinner Table". This piece is part of the museum's permanent collection, and features a triangular dinner table with thirty-nine place settings, each with a plate that featured a sculpture at its center. The place settings were each dedicated to an important women throughout history. We made sure to point out the writers who had claimed a seat at the table: Virginia Woolf and Emily Dickinson, among others. We had the kiddos walk around the entirety of the table and take in the individual place settings while thanking each woman for their individual and collective impact. 


 

This piece is one of the most significant pieces of art to emerge out of the twentieth century, and the kids were truly enchanted by the space. We were so pleased to be sharing this piece with them, and use it as a jumping off point into the reason for our visit, We Wanted A Revolution: Radical Black Women, 1965-85. 

 



This exhibit featured works by a number of prominent black female artists and activists, all working in a variety of mediums, including photography, video art, sculpture and painting. Additionally, the exhibit culled together historical signage and paraphernalia, including magazines, pamphlets, and photographs. As we entered, the kiddos were amazed at the variety of materials in use. Maren was particularly taken by the geometry of Virginia Jaramillo, whose artwork bookended the first room by appearing on opposing walls. The kids were particularly taken by the video art, but not just because they are like moths to a flame when in the vicinity of a screen—they were all genuinely enthralled by the actions of the women in the pieces. Gayatri was particularly focused on these pieces, especially Barbara McCullough’s Water Ritual #1: An Urban Rite of Purification (1979). We couldn’t tear her away.



As we turned the corner, we came into the exhibit’s second room, which featured a photograph by Lorna Simpson: Waterbearer (1986). Our lesson from yesterday, which asked the kids to really consider the weight of a single word, played heavily into the analysis of this piece and the accompanying text. The kiddos spent time trying to figure out what the use of the word “discount” means in the context of the piece.



 




We paid close attention to the way in which the woman’s face remains unseen in the photograph, using that as a way to consider the subject of the photograph to be the universal black woman. The kiddos helped us discuss the representation of the water, and whether the act of pouring it out was meant to telegraph the ‘discounting’ of the subject’s memory. Again, the kids gravitated toward this piece and lead this discussion!


Around the corner was another Lorna Simpson piece, again taking up a sizeable amount of the wall space. Simpson was a particularly great focus for our visit, largely because of her fusion of imagery and text. Her work utilizes words—which the kids excitedly identified as poems—in order to bridge the gap between photography and storytelling. In Gestures/Reenactments (1985), Simpson again hides the entirety of her subject’s face. Ajay was particularly fond of this piece, and we used the texts below each photograph as an opportunity to have the kids practice reading aloud. 



Before leaving the museum, we made sure to have the kids take a second and observe the entirety of the exhibit. This room, we reminded them, exclusively displayed works by women of color, the very people these walls have historically shut out. For decades, women, particularly women of color, were largely kept out of the art world. Their work—and by extension, their voices—were rarely valued. During the very years that these works were made, it was, by a large, unimaginable that a museum would ever dedicated an entire retrospective to their celebration. We felt it was important to contextualize our experience at the museum with this fact.
 

With that, we headed back to our trusty spot on Mount Prospect Park, laid out our tapestry, and had a much-needed lunch break.






Following lunch, we had the kids grab their notebooks and sit in a circle as Romy and Rod began a discussion on the subject of women who helped change the world. We had the kiddos close their eyes and think about women throughout history that left on impression on them. We went around and shared some: Ella Fitzgerald, Amelia Earhart, Rosa Parks, J.K. Rowling, Helen Keller, Eleanor Roosevelt, Malala Yousafzai and more. This lead into our introduction of Odes. Odes are a form of lyric poem that directly address a subject (be it a person, place or thing) with the intention of celebrating their existence. They are in many ways love poems. 


 


In order to emphasize the typical form of odes, Romy shared a poem she wrote this morning while waiting for the kiddos to arrive, an Ode to Patsy Cline. We used this as an example of how odes employ repetition of a subject’s name as a constant direct address. She also specifically wrote one-word lines to break the children free of their sentence-bound framework.




Ode to Patsy Cline by Romy Feder
From there, we had the kids write their own ode poems to a woman that they felt most passionately about, and the results were radical in their own ways.


 
Ode to Helen Keller by Enid

 
Ode to Amelia by Maren

 
Ode to Emma Watson by Annabel

 
Ode to J.K. Rowling by Oona

 
Ode to Trouble by Maddie



Ode to Hillary by Ajay

Ode to J.K. Rowling by Gayatri

 
Ode to Amelia by Lyla

  
Ode to Eleanor by Audrey 
The themes of the day were certainly loaded, but the children were so inspired by the exhibit that their odes flowed out of them effortlessly. They all showed remarkably growth just between Tuesday and Wednesday, and really made mention of how much they loved the form. We will be sure to play around with odes further before the end of the week.



Your kiddos are rad.



Cheers to Herstory,

Romy & Rod


Tuesday, July 18, 2017

Elm Tree Poetry 2017: Week 2 — Day 2


Dear Elm Tree fams, 

Today we had a new friend join us for our second session: Maddie! All of the our poets were just as thrilled to have her join us as we were. The day began with the kiddos playing independently in the forested area behind our drop-off location. To our surprise, the kiddos built a bug hotel!

 
 

We then paired the kiddos up with their travel and poetry buddy for the day & were off to Mount Prospect Park:
Ajay & Oona
Maddie & Enid
Audrey & Annabel
Lyla & Gayatri
Maren & Jacie 

As soon as we settled on a spot, we asked the kids to drop their bags and line up to play RED ROVER! We formed two teams and had the kiddos come up with team names: Courtana vs. Canadian Bunny. Just in case you have forgotten this electric game, the teams each link hands and call out "Red rover, red rover send (Romy) right over!", at which point the person called has to run full-force and try to break the chain of arms on the opposing side. If they break through, they go back to their team; if they can't, they must join the opposing team. The kids were so taken by the game, and so good at it, that there was no natural end point, so we played countless rounds—they didn't want to stop! We will definitely play this game again throughout the week. 


We took a break to get down on some snacks, and Romy made good on a promise to tell the kiddos a story about her childhood turtle, Sleepy-Grumpy. Ask your kids to recount the story! After snack time, we had the kids gather around the tapestry with their notebooks in hand, and read them Pulitzer Prize winner Gwendolyn Brooks' "Bronzeville: Boys and Girls", a collection of poems that celebrate "the joy, beauty, imagination, and freedom of childhood." The poems serve as profiles of the adults and children in the neighborhood of Bronzeville, and we used this as a vehicle to discuss our day's theme: a fusion of journalism and poetry called "verse journalism." 

 

Brooks was one of the early pioneers of the form, articulating the role of the poet as "a fly on the wall...poet as all-seeing eye." She has the distinction of being the first black author to win the Pulitzer Prize, and has been praised by the likes of Langston Hughes, who said, “the people and poems in Gwendolyn Brooks’ book are alive, reaching, and very much of today.” As a result, we wanted to frame our study of verse journalism within her work, as she both chronicles and celebrates the lived realities of her neighbors, working with journalistic clarity to craft lyrical stories. 

We read two poems—"Mexie and Bridie" and "Andre"—each twice, and closely examined the ways they worked as both poetry and journalism: the retelling and reporting of a story. We emphasized the importance of a single word in a poem and had the kids close their eyes to select words that popped out at them. We talked about the stories within the lines of the poems in an effort to lead them towards creating their own poetic profiles. This lead to a discussion about the pillars of journalism, and what makes for good reporting, which we framed as a type of factual storytelling. Brooks was writing poems about her neighbors in Bronzeville, and we asked the kids to think about that act as sprouting from the intention behind reporting: to tell the stories of other people, especially those who can't tell their own. We asked: "who might not be able to tell their own stories, and why?" 

The kiddos were quick to answer. Oona said that reporters might be telling the stories of people who have passed away. Annabel shouted that reports might have to report on behalf of people whose voices are marginalized, like black people and women. And it was Audrey who said that "the government might be stopping people from telling their stories," a comment which really froze Romy and Rod in place. Elm Tree kids are always managing to find new ways to impress us, but it was really humbling to have Audrey be able to cut through an extraneous amount of context-building by quickly establishing a historical truth.

 
 

This lead to our day's writing exercise, which we approached in parts: we had the kids pair up with their poetry buddies and sit face-to-face as we prompted them with a series of questions that they were to treat as a formal interview. The questions were:

1. What was a time that you laughed the hardest?
2. What was a time that you were the most scared?
3. If you could organize a protest, what would you choose to protest?

We taught the kids to listen carefully, to ask the right follow-up questions, and to take notes on keywords and details. We also told them to examine their subjects, to study their gestures and facial expressions, and to jot down descriptive notes about what they were seeing as their partner answered the questions. 

 

Once they had completed the interview portion of our verse journalism process, we broke for lunch and had the kids get some much needed time to run around and play.


After lunch, they sat back down in their pairs and dove into the second portion of our project, which was establishing a form that fused the structure of an article with the form of a poem. Romy had them begin their poem with a line or two that described the details of their subject: the curve of an eyebrow, the curl of a lip, the placement of a hand as they’re speaking. Rod then had the kids turn two of the three interview answers into a quote that they could use as lines in their poem. Rod and Romy explained both what a quote and quotation mark was, as the children were not familiar with these terms. Romy then explained the final part of the project: ending with a rhetorical question that either built on the theme of the poem, or took off in another direction, as many poems do.

 

We had originally planned to have the kids draw an accompanying art piece, but Audrey asked whether we were going to paint portraits of their partners. This was a welcome idea, and a great example of what Elm Tree is about: giving kids the agency to influence a lesson and inform their own learning process. In this case, that resulted in a more intimate piece of art than what we had originally planned.

Check out their work below!

 
by Lyla

 
by Annabel

 
by Jacie

 
by Ajay

 
by Audrey

by Gayatri

 
by Oona  

 
by Enid 

 
by Maddie

  
by Maren 

This poetry project was extremely challenging, but the kiddos took it on with gusto. We tailored this experience based on our combined love of (accurate!) journalism and lyric. Note that you will find the work to be very political, but not much by our own prompting. Aside from the protest question, which we hadn’t even prompted yet, your children lead the discussion towards our current political climate rather naturally. As a result, while we agree with quite literally everything they wrote about 45, it was the result of strictly their own thoughts.


We ended the day by giving the kids some time to run amuck in the sprinklers and atop the jungle gyms of Mount Prospect Park, watching as the sun shined on our bright writers.
 
 
 
  

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